bad news
I'm sorry but this is crap.. its like you were sleep writing.. its bad.. B.A.D
when the night closes in- is a name and a part of a song that's like in every adam sandler movie ever..
and the line - I dream the night away - is also from some where else.. I mean really how tried are you? come on we both know you can write better then this.. try harder and please if you don't notice your taking lines from other songs then you shoiuld probably not listen to music while writing.
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