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Laces Out Dan! · 08-14-2006, 11:46 PM

Well guys this is the first peice of my writing ive ever posted on here.

I recall walking hand in hand with you
down the moonlit streets
We soon approach my house
our souls inseparable

That night, the candles made melodies
our shadows cast the walls
your eyes possess mine
in a moment of clarity
i tell you i love you,
I'll never forget that night.

As i walked you home
We stopped in the field
It was you and I
Laying on the damp cold grass
Our bodies numb in the shocking breeze
I had never felt warmer.

I walked you to your doorstep
Hand in hand bathed in silence
I caressed your shoulder
Lips on lips, a kiss farewell.

08-14-2006, 11:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
Laces Out Dan! I love Puck Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 4,614	My First For You Well guys this is the first peice of my writing ive ever posted on here. I recall walking hand in hand with you down the moonlit streets We soon approach my house our souls inseparable That night, the candles made melodies our shadows cast the walls your eyes possess mine in a moment of clarity i tell you i love you, I'll never forget that night. As i walked you home We stopped in the field It was you and I Laying on the damp cold grass Our bodies numb in the shocking breeze I had never felt warmer. I walked you to your doorstep Hand in hand bathed in silence I caressed your shoulder Lips on lips, a kiss farewell. __________________ We are entirely smooth, We admit to the truth, We are the best at what we do. Last edited by Laces Out Dan!; 12-02-2007 at 10:59 PM.