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Originally Posted by Crowquill
"Seriously, "OMGZ DAT IMAGERYYZ ISNT ACCURATE LOLZ BADDDWRITING."
Look at the blood brothers, "bullimic rainbows vomit what?"
Does that make sense? No, is it a good line? yes.
Besides, ciggarettes = burning. Burning = fire, and fire is often refered to as living.
Actually, look life up in the dictionary fire could be applied to plenty of those."
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The
6 characteristics of living things:
1) reproduction
2) metabolization
3) movement
4) growth and development
5) respond to the environment
6) adapt to their environment.
I'm sorry but a burning cigarette isn't a living thing.
Why don't you find a scientific dictionary and look up life.
Oh and PS: I never said it was a bad line.
And I never said it was bad writing but look at this:
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Originally Posted by Crowquill
lol, do you cut yourself too?
Theres like, two okay lines the rest are ruined by your angst.
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Sounds like you don't think it's ood writing. Or harbor positive feelings to this piece.