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Blain · 10-08-2006, 02:11 AM

I really liked the first 2 lines, and the lyrics are good themselves. But it's just the flow I don't like, it seemed so force. With a bit of tweakin it'd be pretty good IMO

10-08-2006, 02:11 AM	#2 (permalink)
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,034	I really liked the first 2 lines, and the lyrics are good themselves. But it's just the flow I don't like, it seemed so force. With a bit of tweakin it'd be pretty good IMO