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Raine · 10-08-2006, 10:52 PM

It feels like you've taken one of my fantasies and put it on paper.

Last stanza is one of the sexiest, romantic things I've ever read.

It sounds ok. (very very extremely ok) but . . I dunno.
I say go for it.

10-08-2006, 10:52 PM	#4 (permalink)
Raine Full-Time Hellion Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: PA Posts: 1,531	It feels like you've taken one of my fantasies and put it on paper. Last stanza is one of the sexiest, romantic things I've ever read. It sounds ok. (very very extremely ok) but . . I dunno. I say go for it. __________________ A pair of powerful spectacles has sometimes sufficed to cure a person in love. ~ Friedrich Nietzsche