I wrote something sort of similar to this recently, more in the whole diary-esque style. I'll critique it more later, theres a few parts I don't like but it seems great at first read.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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