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Alo · 11-11-2006, 04:55 AM

I like the chorus.
The verses seem a bit chaotic, and it doesn't really seem to fit together. On the other hand, that might fit the topic...

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Alo Scarf Join Date: May 2006 Location: Brighton, UK Posts: 715	I like the chorus. The verses seem a bit chaotic, and it doesn't really seem to fit together. On the other hand, that might fit the topic... __________________ I rocked my shoelaces untied