yobbos?
This is good, I like the first verse the most.
I don't quiet get it in parts though, like I think you're talking to "cinderella" in the first/last verse right? Then you go "my cinderella she knows me well" in a different person viewing. I don't know i'm probaly missing something.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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