Would the phrase
"Adorning himself, in handcuffs and tights
Fulfilling his burgeoning penchant for vice"
make sense (I know it's a bit convoluted, which is why I like it in this case)? It sounds very funny to me, so I'd like to put it in (where the similar line already is)
And should I rename it
"Santa Clause is going to town"
"Santa, that filthy old hound"
What other phrase could I use here? Come on, team effort.
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Originally Posted by Katyppfan
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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