Omnipotence, Savior-faire...yeah, those are the only "million dollar words" I see. The others you can pretty much learn from getting an education. Besides an admitted overabundance of imagery, I don't see much in the way of techniques. No real metaphor, one or two similes. I wouldn't say it's overstuffed with much other than imagery.
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Wolverinewolfweiselpigeon said:
What's with people dying? Shit.
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