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angel18 · 01-09-2007, 11:07 AM

It's good as it is. Although the constant rhymning kinda bored me a little. You could also add more length to it.

Angel

01-09-2007, 11:07 AM	#2 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	It's good as it is. Although the constant rhymning kinda bored me a little. You could also add more length to it. Angel