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Loser · 02-02-2007, 08:50 PM

It's not bad I like a couple of lines it was alright just try to make it more abstract or make it like a story sort of, that helps alot.

02-02-2007, 08:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
Loser The Professor Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: New York City Posts: 1,113	It's not bad I like a couple of lines it was alright just try to make it more abstract or make it like a story sort of, that helps alot.