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Trauma · 02-07-2007, 08:28 PM

Okay, I re-read it, it makes more sense now.
Don't turn all of your works into untitled poems about girls, that doesn't work out well.

The sketchy phrasing does suit it partially well.

And though your countenance
Isn't that of a dove
I solemnly stare
To you goes my love
?

02-07-2007, 08:28 PM	#9 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Okay, I re-read it, it makes more sense now. Don't turn all of your works into untitled poems about girls, that doesn't work out well. The sketchy phrasing does suit it partially well. And though your countenance Isn't that of a dove I solemnly stare To you goes my love ? __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño