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SoulSoldier · 02-16-2007, 05:43 PM

Thanks.
I wrote this based around the title,from a personal experience.
The problem I have is I don't like the title, unfortunately the phrase crops up throughout.
I'm looking for an alternative and ways to improve this overall. I'm stuck.

02-16-2007, 05:43 PM	#3 (permalink)
SoulSoldier Groupie Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: England Posts: 4	Thanks. I wrote this based around the title,from a personal experience. The problem I have is I don't like the title, unfortunately the phrase crops up throughout. I'm looking for an alternative and ways to improve this overall. I'm stuck.