"Woo me with your silent eyes"
I really don't like the word woo, I was going to suggest changing it to charm but you said charming the line prior. But thats completely preference.
"Red letter writing on the ceiling"
Writing in blood makes me think of a cheesy horror movie.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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