It's not terriable, there are defiently some really good lines in it, but often you fall into the trap of a white person trying to talk and speak like a black person, making it sound unreal.
From the what I understand about rap it's about sounding real, you know, bitches and hoes. And when you try to take on someone else's persona in a rap song you end up sounding false.
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