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My smile doesn't quite reach eyes,
My tears I try my best to hide.
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Whos eyes? the tear line is just bland.
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But it's useless,
It's pointless,
Any fool can see I'm hopelessly in love with you.
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yawn.
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You used to adore me,
Now you ignore me.
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Don't rhyme me and me, and that line was soso predictable not even kidding.
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I used to feel wanted,
Now I'm just in the way again.
So I suppose I'll just keep going,
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This line seems more like something spoken than a line in the song.
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If you want her take her.
I won't stand in your way,
Won't be Second best,
Won't lose this race.
Learn to love again, get you out from under my skin.
Tell myself I don't need you,
Maybe someday it''l be the truth.
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"Maybe someday it'll be true" would sound much better.
I didn't really wanna finish, see my above summary of the first song and thats what I think of this one also.