"I am a man who is whole.
Without the sum of his conscience.
I am a liar.
And you exist as my only truth".
That's easily the most poetic lines I've read of yours so far Crowe.
The rest I liked, but if you could match it with words like those, it would be perfect.
I always enjoy reading your stuff, keep posting them up .
And I hope more people start to give a bit more feedback in this part of the forum.
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