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~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ · 04-06-2007, 06:38 PM

"Some of today's well accepted emo qualities appeared me, "

Appeared me?

"guitar melodies but i'll get"

guitar melodies, but I'll

"and Indian Summer Most of"

Needs a period.

Apart from these errors and maybe a few more, pretty good job.

04-06-2007, 06:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: VAN Posts: 2,530	"Some of today's well accepted emo qualities appeared me, " Appeared me? "guitar melodies but i'll get" guitar melodies, but I'll "and Indian Summer Most of" Needs a period. Apart from these errors and maybe a few more, pretty good job.