View Single Post
Old 04-10-2007, 07:36 AM   #7 (permalink)
Trauma
snickers
 
Trauma's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: detroit
Posts: 2,194
Default

"The songwriting has been commonly and ignorantly mischaracterized as being solely depression and sometimes suicide oriented."
The fact that you have to say that is hilarious.

"Starting in the 1990s with an emo influence"
Given

1985 (termed the "Revolution Summer" marked the emergence of many new bands like Moss Icon
Where is the other parenthesis?

"This movement got more notice then the original emo movement and"
Refer to post-emo and change 'then' to 'than'.





Are you going to branch out more or is this it?
P.S. Good job.
__________________
A mi no me importa nada
Para mi la vida es un sueño
Trauma is offline   Reply With Quote