Hey... I found this site in my favorites the other day, I joined it a while ago then kind of forgot about it, I forgot what a great site it was.
Anyway, I'm the main lyricist in my band... so here's something of mine. Any comments are welcome.
A Message in the Dark
I wrote a message in the dark
Wakened by the passing cars
grabbed a pen and emptied out my heart
Old cliches and reused words
Thrown into an empty song
[Feels] like I've already waited too long
I sent a message in the dark
[But] I'd rather have you talk with me
'Bout how this world was made for you and me
[Now] I'll just linger at the door
Knowing that you won't be home
Wait four years and see your smile again
You say you've crossed a thousand seas,
But now you're drowning in a stream of
thoughts and bits of you and me?
All that glitters is not gold
Take a fall from a first glance, you don't
realize that life's not a slow dance
I scratched a message in the dark
I can't remember what I wrote
Fallacy, it was just a note.. right?