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Old 04-27-2007, 08:25 AM   #11 (permalink)
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actually it is indeed my style to rhyme and i do use different patterns but i happen to write this one this way... oh well. and it works with the guitar/bass/drums ive written so i think ill leave this alone for now. i will indeed use this advice in the future if im in a bind. thanks. ;]
Yeah, don't use such forced rhyming, it makes me go into snooze mode.
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