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Old 05-28-2007, 01:58 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Lmao, that could kinda work if it weren't for the fact that I've never been married. But anywho, I revised this and I'm kinda pleased with the revision. I kept the third stanza but everything else is new. I was kinda hesitant for it to have a theme (magic in this case) but it seemed more fitting that way. And I changed the title as well because I love alliteration.

An Arcane Afair

The words we shared were a sort
Of magical bond that tied us together
And I had never seen such an
Arcane affair before; so I decided
To take a little stroll with you. Your
Pale blue eyes suggested future years
Of our own castle town, bonded together
By that one spell that you cast over
Me. My dear siren, you have a different kind
Of magic in your veins.

So you had me take a sip of your love potion
And it tasted so awkward, so awkward
All the time, but my thirst remained
Unquinched so I kept drinking more
And more until you had me in your deep sleep.

Then I dreamt of a tree making love to the sky with
Each of its skiny branches stroking your spine and
I saw your face giving a wink in one of those clouds
While a lonely little boy lay in front of the pond
Allowing the water level to raise just a little more.

Now it's been years since I've felt the
Power of your spell but that dark locket
You gave me helps to keep my mind
Grounded and balanced for the sirens to come.

Last edited by The Dave; 05-30-2007 at 08:12 PM.
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