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Old 07-16-2007, 06:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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First thing that sprang to mind...Fresh Prince Of Bel-Air.
But then most rap has that effect on me.
That'll be more my ignorance than anything else.

Flows ok, but the subject matter is hardly original and none of it's content is earth shattering either.


Constructive criticism...it begins to tell a story, but other than it being about a guy called Rich, I have no idea what the point of this is.
"From zero to hero overnight"...how?
And why would a cocaine snorting rapist deserve, "some god-damn respect"?

Before you go giving me a hard time...

...just saying.
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