Twist Of Fate (draft)
Just now finished this, and I pretty much think of it as a draft.
Ironically, I probably wont make many changes, if any.
Give me some criticism.
(Good will be appreciated, but bad will be ignored. ^_^)
Twist Of Fate
08/01/07 - 08/02/07
[-----Verse 1-----]
Be my blessing
Not my curse
My little angel
I fear the worst
Is yet to come
But I'll save that sorrow, for another day
It's been a while now
And I can't think
My mind's been overrun
And damaged by mistakes
Accidental - or otherwise
The things I dream about
Seem to take over my life
I hope I wake up - to a better day
One without a path, blocked by enemies
[-----End Verse-----]
[-----Chorus-----]
And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
[-----End Chorus-----]
[-----Verse 2-----]
My bittter blessing
My precious curse
Be my angel
Cause I fear the worst
Come sit beside me
My dearest friend
And tell me what you've done
And where you've been
[-----End Verse-----]
[-----Chorus-----]
And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
[-----End Chorus-----]
[-----Verse 3-----]
I thought of leaving
But I wont
Bitter indifference, has always been my home
And looking back - I've always said
Don't think about moving foward, with the past stuck in your head
[-----End Verse-----]
[-----Chorus-----]
And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
A final twist of fate
[-----End Chorus-----]
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Quote:
Originally Posted by RezZ
I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.
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Last edited by Ace; 08-02-2007 at 01:31 AM.
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