I like this alot Phap. Not a lot of masturbatory description going on here, it's simple. It's elegant IN its simplicity. I like the contrast of the appreciation of the beauty in a town that you may not enjoy so much. I like being thrown for a loop when you mention something out of nature in the midst of your praise of the autumnal colors (the volvos specifically). This is more of a classic sort of poem -- very nice!
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