I think this lyric is too wordy to make a good pop song. It could do with having about half as many words.
And before anybody thinks of any arguments against this, I'm right. Bear that in mind.
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Originally Posted by Katyppfan
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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