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Piss Me Off · 09-10-2008, 06:54 AM

I am obviously not in the same business mindset.
I think you need to jazz it up a bit. It reads like a christmas carol and that won't appeal to the kids.

09-10-2008, 06:54 AM	#5 (permalink)
Piss Me Off Moodswings n' Roundabouts Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: At the corner of Dude and Catastrophe Posts: 4,512	I am obviously not in the same business mindset. I think you need to jazz it up a bit. It reads like a christmas carol and that won't appeal to the kids. __________________ Last FM Rate Yr Music Muxtape