Did you write "The Lost" in a 'beatnik w/bongos' kind of style? If that wasn't on purpose, it's amazing, because i swear i could hear them! lol
Ewwwwwwww!!! It gave me goose bumps, especially that one line:
'with invisible whips pleasing to the touch'
It's dark and creepy, that's for sure!
yeah, bongos and some sort of high pitched like chime or bell or A PIECE OF METAL you find somewhere that makes a sort of nice sound, but is off, just a little.
i want to concentrate on the first one for a bit more before saying anything about it.
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