My best song
hey,
I'm a hobbyist lyricist and I just joined this site in hopes of finding someone to sing some of my stuff and to get honest opinions on my songs.
Below I'm going to post a song I wrote which I consider to be one of my best so far, If you like it, want to sing it or just want comment about it fill free.
Ok the song is called "Them Days" and here it is
Oh there was a time when everything was fine the grass was green and red was the wine
Good was good and great was just fine Good people had good clean minds
Oh let the people say
Take me back to them days
Oh mom was good and dad was kind all the children obeyed just fine
what was mine was yours and yours was mine but that was in a much simpler of times
Oh so they say, Take me back to them days
People people are saying that times are tough so toughen up but enough's enough
That's what I say
Take me back to them days
Can't you hear the clatter clatter tell me people what's the mater
Everything seems good but it's a lie
I take off my hat and I settle on down take off my face and reveal my frown
I wish that I was in a simpler time because I've got a simpler mind
Oh come my way and Take me back to them days
to them days
Buddy holy gee miss molly everything seems bright and jolly
I want to be all melancholy come on come on come on lets all change
I will be a guy you can be my girl come on people lets embrace the world
Lets all say
Take me back to them days
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