Music Banter - View Single Post

Arya Stark · 01-12-2009, 08:03 PM

I like the piece in general.

I just feel like it doesn't flow, with the varying rhyming sequence and rhythm.

01-12-2009, 08:03 PM	#3 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	I like the piece in general. I just feel like it doesn't flow, with the varying rhyming sequence and rhythm.