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Arya Stark · 01-12-2009, 08:05 PM

I like it a lot.

I'm just not sure of the least line of each stanza.

Because it feels like a run-on in comparison to the rest of the stanza.

01-12-2009, 08:05 PM	#35 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	I like it a lot. I'm just not sure of the least line of each stanza. Because it feels like a run-on in comparison to the rest of the stanza.