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Old 01-23-2009, 08:48 AM   #76 (permalink)
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^Seconded on the advice thing. Sorry man but since when have lyrics had to be in a "conversation"al mannor? Take a look at Lucy in the sky with diamonds, great song by The Beatles.

Picture yourself on a boat on a river
With tangerine trees and marmalade skies
Somebody calls you, you answer quite slowly
A girl with kaleidoscope eyes

Cellophane flowers of yellow and green
Towering over your head
Look for the girl with the sun in her eyes
and she's gone
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