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aveneficus · 02-02-2009, 08:27 PM

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I eased through the gates,
Peter’s back turned away.
The foyer, gold, with inlaid diamonds.
A guise of what lies ahead.
The chapel is blessed in eternal fire,
Holy water stained blood red.
Face of beautiful angels,
Worn, wrinkled, and grey.
Bone yards piled high,
Body upon body.
Nooses tight around our necks,
Finally within God’s grasp.

02-02-2009, 08:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
aveneficus Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Cincinnati, OH Posts: 44	A Quick Poem Feedback greatly appreciated! I eased through the gates, Peter’s back turned away. The foyer, gold, with inlaid diamonds. A guise of what lies ahead. The chapel is blessed in eternal fire, Holy water stained blood red. Face of beautiful angels, Worn, wrinkled, and grey. Bone yards piled high, Body upon body. Nooses tight around our necks, Finally within God’s grasp. __________________ If dreams are like movies, then memories are films about ghosts Last edited by aveneficus; 02-02-2009 at 08:46 PM.