Ad Astra (Revised)
Alright, so a while back I wrote something on here titled "Ad Astra".
I've been toying with the idea of doing an alternate version for a while now, because I'm not sure if I picked the right feel for the lyrics the first time.
Let me know what you think of this version.
I may replace the word "shamed" later and add some more to it.
This is pretty much the core of the lyrics, though.
Ad Astra (Revised)
02/04/09 - 02/05/09
[-----Verse 1-----]
My body's broken, my soul is shamed
I'm barely breathing and I feel
Pushed away
From your love and from your grace
I need your light to guide me
Into place
[-----End Verse-----]
[-----Chorus-----]
I cannot go on
Without you anymore
But why can't I let go
If I'm so afraid to hold you close?
I need your light to guide me
Into your open arms
I need your light to guide me
To the stars
[-----End Chorus-----]
[-----Verse 2-----]
My spirit's fading, my mind is numb
I'm barely living and I feel
So alone
I need your light to give me hope
I've been so lost since you
Left the world
[-----End Verse-----]
[-----Chorus-----]
I cannot go on
Without you anymore
But why can't I let go
If I'm so afraid to hold you close?
I need your light to guide me
Into your open arms
I need your light to guide me
To the stars (x2)
[-----End Chorus-----]
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Originally Posted by RezZ
I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.
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