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Old 02-16-2009, 12:25 PM   #47 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by FireInCairo View Post
Here is something I've been toying with....
I've been working on my novella so it's been a while since I wrote any lyrics.
This isn't meant to be clever or anything, it's just a simple little pop song with an lcd soundsystem like groove.

Oh Cleopatra
Lay down for me
Oh Cleopatra
Won't you lay down for me?

Oh, I love your eyes
What a surprise
Cleopatra, if you care
Don't be a heart break for me

Cleopatra won't you do this for me
Play their game, never going to set you free
I never want to let you down
If I do, I'll never come back around




It's not really done and I'm kind of stuck as to where to go with it...
Thoughts and suggestions would be appreciated.
Whether you're actually writing a song about Cleopatra or she's a metaphor you could probably do some research on her - read a book about her or something and you might find some inspiration or direction.
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