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Rob-Boy · 02-19-2009, 10:49 PM

It's overly too long, you probably could paraphrase a lot of what you said into better constructed stanzas, but I could see the lyrics building up in one of those 8 minute songs that layer and layer to a crescendo finale.

02-19-2009, 10:49 PM	#9 (permalink)
Rob-Boy Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Alberta, Canada Posts: 14	It's overly too long, you probably could paraphrase a lot of what you said into better constructed stanzas, but I could see the lyrics building up in one of those 8 minute songs that layer and layer to a crescendo finale. __________________ Paper Ghost