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Old 02-21-2009, 07:35 PM   #21 (permalink)
Schizotypic
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Okay, Deep&Depressing! I feel like you are writting about experiancing struggle constantly. But, despite your SN, the deeper you go into interpersonal struggle, the more you fearlessly process through, the less depressed you get. I'd try looking inside, try out some other methods of thinking about life, look at your part, change a little, do something durastic, whatever. But I think your poems/songs would have more to them if they were about processing through a strugle then just having it happen to you.
...not that it's really my place to say, but I feel comfortable saying it.
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