Thread: My first song
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Old 02-22-2009, 10:25 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Klamninja View Post
I have half of my verse1, do you wanna see, please help with it.
Sure, post it.
If you want influence, I would suggest reading lyrics by Neutral Milk Hotel, Animal Collective, and Fleet Foxes for more Avant-Garde style, and bands like Death Cab for Cutie, The Decemberists, and Okkervil River for a more straightforward, heart on your sleeve approach.

And not to blow my own trumpet, but I just posted a love song (Flammable) here, if you want to take a look at that.
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