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Old 02-23-2009, 05:10 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Rob-Boy View Post
It's decent given the prompt, but i think it's funny that you bolded lines that you borrowed from a good charlotte song.
I bolded it to show the slight seperation from the poem itself, yes i realize it is a line from a song, but it was running through my head that entire day, so i used it.

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