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ArchAngel1024 · 02-24-2009, 04:29 PM

I like the imagery and flow. There weren't any parts that seemed out of place to me.

I love the chorus, by the way. It's a very nice metaphor (I think it would be considered a metaphor).

If you use it in a song, I'd like to hear it.

02-24-2009, 04:29 PM	#107 (permalink)
ArchAngel1024 Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 10	I like the imagery and flow. There weren't any parts that seemed out of place to me. I love the chorus, by the way. It's a very nice metaphor (I think it would be considered a metaphor). If you use it in a song, I'd like to hear it.