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Originally Posted by BoopieJones
haikus indeed show
The talent of one, yet not
in this case I fear.
Just messin with you. This is an interesting poem.
"My young sickly flowers" = sin?
nice.
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No, not sin.
You know though, when I write I try to make good metaphors but my meaning is (most likely) usually lost in vagueness I'm realizing. So, take from it what you do and if you like what you take- keep it, it's yours.