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Arya Stark · 03-08-2009, 07:51 PM

I feel that sometimes, profanity can ruin a piece. If the piece were absolutely phenomenol and you added an obscene word or two, I may have skipped over the words.

But I found myself skimming through the poem to see why exactly the profanity was existing...

I wasn't particularly approving of this piece. Sorry.

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Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	I feel that sometimes, profanity can ruin a piece. If the piece were absolutely phenomenol and you added an obscene word or two, I may have skipped over the words. But I found myself skimming through the poem to see why exactly the profanity was existing... I wasn't particularly approving of this piece. Sorry.