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Old 03-12-2009, 01:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
7gaugejames
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Walk as we will, drag as it suits

Cold is the air, twisted table sheets

Bird frozen on the pike, vomit grown to roots


An amazing opening. I'm jealous. The rest is hit and miss, I love "laughing in tremolo" and don't understand" The twisted eye of pragmatic below" All in all I think the bird imagery is what reminds me of Roland The Gunslinger. Something Stephen King would've written, maybe King would've used something else besides"I hear the prickled timer gasping and frying"
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