It's an okay review and you shouldn't worry so much about reviewing something which is not considered "cool" on musicbanter. You may get a little heat for it, but a real rock 'n roller won't let that stop him.
I have a couple of questions though. First off, what is the release year? This should be included when you write a review.
Second, how does your rating system work? You give the album 4 stars. Is it 4 stars out of 5 or is it 4 out of 10?