Wow ! that is a very interesting interpretation....i really like the concept of havint it "continue on and on like stairs might" I think that Veridical Fiction's re-write scans better, and would probably be better if put to music, but darkcornerinthecloset's interpeteation really captures the free low and mood of the original better, i think. I would love to hear what the author thinks of these interpetations. I know that i would be pleased and flattered if people had put so mush time and thought into responding to sonething that i had written. Great work by all of you, and I look forward to seeing more....
paradoxy
Ancient Gods
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