The guitar lines run smoothly, my only word of advice is change the octave that you're singing in. From what I heard, it seems as though your "pushing" the sound out of your throat rather than singing in a more comfortable tone and letting the sound resonate from your stomach. It should almost feel like breathing while your sing (at least that's how it goes for me). I like the lyrics as well. Keep it up!
-EMS-
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