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Originally Posted by chard
Its a song best played by a piano. I hope that answers your question.
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It seems like a song best played by the person who wrote it,i hope there's a meter/rhythm/tune in your head because it doesn't fit into anything that could be described as a pattern, you're all over the place writing down whatever comes into your head and praying that it makes sense(which it doesn't) try and gain some sense of direction instead of closing your eyes bumping about the place in the dark....the volume of your work is impressive but the sentiments are muddled and forlorn of any meaning outside of your warped perceptions....instead of spending so much time on different ideas try to sort out each one at a time.
I'm sure your writing will benefit from it and will cease to be so much like whatever song you're listening to as you write.