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Old 06-10-2009, 01:57 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Though it was originally used as a poetry scheme, I would use it in a songwriting sense.

To put my own personal flare into it, I was thinking about setting up a mid-line rhyming scheme as well. I don't want to take away from the free-style versing by rhyming verse 1,3 or 2,4 - but I do want to make it plausible as a hook in song.

Example:

The path, it's dark you'll stumble.
Just do your best to walk straight.
Atlas' struggle, hark his tale.
Both cannot be shrugged.


Not so much for the lyrics, but opinions on the style?
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