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Old 07-23-2009, 09:42 PM   #31 (permalink)
cardboard adolescent
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when will i feel the weight of the things i've said?
it's a small room
and the bum in the corner
has pissed himself
once more

i couldn't be here
if i weren't
not here
you see?

i wonder if parallel lines
ever get
antsy

i wonder
if

this is it

can i be
the great liar of my times

to take the prominent words
and twist them
cleverly

i could not be bitter
before your teasing smile
like your teasing light
in the corner of my vision

drawing the curtain, she shudders
a little thought had passed between them
is it too predictable?
she turns
"yeah"
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